can some one help me rewrite this paragraph so it can sound better.?

In schools with high binge drinking rates, binge drinking doest not only affect the drinker it also affect students who do not drink. “34 percent of non binge drinker reported being insulted or humiliated by binge drinkers; 13 percent reported being pushed, hit, or assaulted; 54 percent reported having to care of a drunken student; 68 percent were interrupted while studying; and 26 percent of women experienced an unwanted sexual advance” (IBID). More than 696,000 students between the ages of 18 and 24 are assaulted by another students who has being binge drinking (Ellis). When college students drink they don’t only effects themselves they hurt others. Women are the ones who are hurt the most from binge drinking.

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4 Responses to “can some one help me rewrite this paragraph so it can sound better.?”

  1. darlene r Says:

    Do your own work Don’t be so ;lazy Plagiarism is illegal, your teachers read this site

  2. mtdance72 Says:

    go through the paragraph and any words that may seem small and not very powerful try to replace it with a synonym. also try to use as many adjectives as possible.

  3. Chelsea Says:

    You have coped that from a web site and you want us to put it in to OUR own words.

  4. Kayla Says:

    do you know how easy it is for you teachers to find this web page and then expell you from school for plagerism?